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Dog or Frog?
Contributed by
justme03
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Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 05:44:01 PM in AEST
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I have a dog
his name is Bob
but people call him Rob
and seem to think he's a frog
So day in and day out
he sits on a log
pretending to be a frog
To my great dismay
he never runs or plays
just sits on that log;
the dog that pretends to be a frog
And suddenly one day..
he
croaked...
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2005-09-03 17:44:01]
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Re: Dog or Frog?
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by colinbaker62 on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 05:59:51 PM AEST
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It's clear to me what he is, a drog of course.
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Re: Dog or Frog?
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by trini on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:19:14 PM AEST
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heh, very nice. i agree drog is what it is.
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Re: Dog or Frog?
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by Archie on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 08:15:57 PM AEST
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| Nevermind, :) All I can do is smile. I don't write poetry like that any more because my friends think it's too catchy and in an awkward moment it would come up as a joke. |
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Re: Dog or Frog?
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 06:17:07 PM AEST
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| I liked this poem. It put a nice smile on my face. You did an excellent job on this piece. |
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Re: Dog or Frog?
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 11:35:46 PM AEST
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lmao i swear and kid u not the tittle caught my eye but u have managed 2 do somthing no one ever dares 2 do cause i'm not one 2
chill, this cracks me up i mean it made me laugh enough 2 call it a masterpeice not 2 mention that ending, lol, this
deserves this **********
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Re: Dog or Frog?
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 02:17:13 PM AEST
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LOL.. Oh my, I love this poem lol
Could be made into a limerick..
It is light and humorous.
Make the verse form of 5 chiefly anapestic verses
(a metrical foot consisting of two short syllables followed by one long syllable or of two unstressed syllables followed by one stressed syllable)
meaning, composed in meters....
of which lines 1, 2, and 5 are of 3 feet and lines 3 and 4 are of 2 feet with a rhyme scheme of aabba
I love the ending.. Croaked. Now that was a very, very brilliant idea.
Yours is aaaa, skip a rhyme, aabbaab skip, skip rhyme.
So, I see it as a limerick..
well job done, its fantastic.
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: Dog or Frog?
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by hellsfallenangel on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 10:36:59 AM AEST
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that was a good poem it made me laugh tu for writing it bye bye
DEMON |
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