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Paint by numbers
Contributed by
starry_eyed_soul
on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 04:34:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
PoemsonBeauty
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She paints by numbers
Right in the book
Everything so perfect
Or so it looks
What is perfect
Well my define
Is freedom to chose
And chance to find
A blank canvas
With nothing to excite
Is way more perfect
Than her beautiful
Paint by number
Could ever be
Because this blank canvas
Clean and smooth
Leaves room to grow
To change to move
To let your inspiration soar
Let your mind explore
If in the end
Your elaborate scene
Does not turn out
It still contains more perfection
Than her restricted painting
May seem to be
She paints by numbers
Right in the book
Everything so perfect
Or so it looks
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Re: Paint by numbers
(User Rating: 1 ) by gary on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 05:42:42 PM AEST (User
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It was a good poem I wanted to find out more about the them so I wanted someting denoted of maybe more of a scene that could be set I liked the clearness and topic. |
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