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stuck in flames
Contributed by
lostrelic
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Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 02:41:59 PM in AEST
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lying in the forest with the red glow surrounding animals scurry in fright
a mile away the forests burns me surround by fire's light
stuck in this inferno the heat too close for fear
as nature clears a path without the heavens shedding a tear
walking at night as my path is bright
no time to sleep in this restless night
as men scamper to put out the flames
i walk in this forest escaping the rains
this beauty of red filling the sky
wondering if i'll make it out alive
hemisphere so black as dark fades into day
i think its time to finally lay
sleep in the day surrounded by stone
a way to escape the flames alone
choking on smoke i make my way out
i knew in my heart without a doubt
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lostrelic
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2005-09-03 14:41:59]
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Re: stuck in flames
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 04:13:13 PM AEST
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*****as nature clears a path with out the heavens shedding a tear
Never seems to rain when fires break out.
You write a beautiful description of nature, while expressing the dangers of both animal and mankind.
It took years for me before I got to visit Yellowstone National Park. Finally made it.. saw all the most beautiful trees, colorful scenery and sulphur pools, animals, Old Faithful blowing up, and on time too, just gorgeous. A couple years later, went back, the fire destroyed a lot of its beauty.
http://www.yellowstone.net/history.htm
Your write helps to remind us of natural beauty, to appreciate what we have. Mother nature has her own ideas and she can change the view faster than you can wink an eye.
Thank you Lostrelic so very much.
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: stuck in flames
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by trini on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:38:43 PM AEST
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i love your decriptions. mother nature sure can unfural her wrath. very nice write. keep up the good work.
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