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stuck
Contributed by
ipanema_gal
on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 07:56:55 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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the dramatic pride
with which you hide
behind a cloud of shattered might
unable to see a step ahead
of one step back
pitty for the step you lack
and in the secrecy of a faceless act
the truth was hacked
and purpose was forgotten
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ipanema_gal
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2005-09-03 07:56:55]
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Re: stuck
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by Caged Soul on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 08:18:22 AM AEST
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Intelligent & to the point. You know how to use words in order to bring accross a true and undistorted mnessage. Would have liked a bit more body, but still great.
Keep it up girl! |
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Re: stuck
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by just-b on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 08:27:42 AM AEST
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| strong and up front nicely done.... |
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Re: stuck
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 12:31:38 PM AEST
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| great write. i really loved this... |
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