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The Girl I Left Behind
Contributed by
shorty20
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Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 02:38:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Tears sting my eyes
Can't get rid of all these cries
Can't stand all these lies
I look in the mirror
And what do I see?
Fragments and pieces
Of what used to be me.
These feelings of hate
I can not ignore
I don't even know
Who I am anymore.
He's turned me into
This distorted reflection
I need to turn back
Go the other direction
But his grip is to tight
His hold is to strong
I'm locked in a place
Where I don't belong.
I need to turn back
I need to remind
Myself
Of the girl I left behind
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Re: The Girl I Left Behind
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by sick_n_twisted on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 03:25:40 AM AEST
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awesome poem...love the rhymes reminds me of my mom she cant get away from my dad ur lucky to have got out of that relationship alot of women dont. love how to ended the last part with the title really cool great poem i really love this one great job
xoxo
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Re: The Girl I Left Behind
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 06:53:46 AM AEST
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| How I relate to this.I,m glad you too got out of it.It's the control of the mind that's the worst and you don't know just how controlling until you break free.I hope you , like me have found a warm and loving relationship.I say thanks every day for the love I now have.A thought provoking poem, well written , Ros |
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Re: The Girl I Left Behind
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by sahakuty on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 08:35:00 AM AEST
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| Very beautiful poem . Has a great rhyme to it. Love the inspiration that good memories can bring to the present misery. Makes me think of the little girl in me. |
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