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Chances TakenOr may be Took
Contributed by
brew
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Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 10:34:23 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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We know life has no guarentees........
So , why do so many not take that first step to happiness
Why, wait
We know life is too short
yes, its full of pain and disappointments
Known all of our lives
We choose to wait
And most kick them self
Look at the dispair that some have had recently
But , deep down what they lost, can be replaced
A LOVE..............can not
The heart can not
The one who holds all in the soul....Can not
So stop waiting.........take the plunge
People have nothing to lose....except materlistic stuff
Most of that is not considered a jewel
The jewel, is the heart that is set in stone......................
Copyright ©
brew
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2005-09-02 22:34:23]
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Re: Chances TakenOr may be Took
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 11:13:46 PM AEST
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Very nice, and how true...Almost funny I'm reading this (the timing). Good job, especially the last line.
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Re: Chances TakenOr may be Took
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 05:59:47 PM AEST
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Par excellance this is a most lovey write and
filled with compassion and wisdom only the
heart is capable of speaking of, love that last
line, truer words were never spoke . . .
Ben |
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