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Her
Contributed by
hardrocker15198916
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Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 09:49:08 PM in AEST
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---Benevolence in her shining smile
in her eyes hiding all the while
clothed in perfection; flowing free
sultry silence but icy in me ---
Copyright ©
hardrocker15198916
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2005-09-02 21:49:08]
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Re: Her
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by Alibi on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 12:40:15 AM AEST
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I do like what you have to say, but I would have enjoyed a more expanded piece even more.
Smiles and blessings. |
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Re: Her
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by Caged Soul on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 07:50:48 AM AEST
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Who ever said you can't express your love for someone in four lines. It's all about what you say and how you say it, kinda like the saying "it's not the size but how you use it"( no personal reference intended). I really like this one.
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Re: Her
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by CrazyCowboy557 on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 09:46:52 AM AEST
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| Short, but very meaningful |
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Re: Her
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by RealCrystal on
Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 09:16:43 PM AEST
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| although some may consider it short, I feel as though you wrote exactly enough to create a feeling of understanding for your reader, I enjoyed reading your poem in all its essence. |
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