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A Critic
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WAE
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Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 05:43:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
HumorPoetry
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Cliche, he says
And puts your work away.
He doesn't care,
He does this every day.
"This isn't right!" or
"That is completely wrong!"
And then he grinns and says,
"You aren't poet.
Go and play ping-pong!"
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WAE
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2005-09-02 17:43:17]
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Re: A Critic
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by sick_n_twisted on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 03:15:10 AM AEST
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haha sure...funny...reminds me of my dad....nice work
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Re: A Critic
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by gwenevere on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 11:14:18 AM AEST
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Different poetry suits different people.Some like rhymn some hate it etc.Never let any one tell you you're no good.Everyone has something to offer,
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Re: A Critic
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by candysears on
Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 09:08:02 PM AEST
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Funny and i think is very good.
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Re: A Critic
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 20th September 2005 @ 07:25:24 AM AEST
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Very funny...thank you. :)
Tim |
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