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Wanderer
Contributed by
HellsLibrarian
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Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 01:54:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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as I wandered, weak and weary
down the road so dark and dreary
her beloved face, so bleak and leery,
her tears haunted me
I wandered on, through the town
the rain pouring, tumbling down
picturing her troubled frown
her tears haunting me
I wandered on, lost, alone
continuing on, through the unknown
it's my own fault I'm on my own
her tears haunting me
she smiles now, at another
she smiles now, the little mother
she smiles now, and I would rather
it was her smile haunting me
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Re: Wanderer
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 02:43:58 PM AEST
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| I hate when your mind says deja vu. Seems like I have heard this poem before but maybe not. Other then that a very good write. |
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Re: Wanderer
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by candysears on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 05:24:53 PM AEST
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I really like your poem
Very good indeed!
God Bless! |
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Re: Wanderer
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by europeanprincess on
Saturday, 12th August 2006 @ 10:36:18 PM AEST
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| this was a very good poem. i hate to say this because i know that when anyone reads poems sometimes they all sound alike but i kid you not this poem sounds so familiar to me. perhpas someone i know used similar words and sadness to it. i really enjoyed it. thank you. |
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