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The Search Within
Contributed by
Willofree
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Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 12:46:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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In the inner stillness there is an I
The essence of us and where we reside
We must shut out all the noise and find,
A quite place within our mind
Getting there is a difficult matter
Fear hides in the crevices of the latter
Brandishing fangs if we go too deep
However, there is a level beyond where the demons sleep
We must be determined to press on
Our journey through the great beyond
With no compass or map to follow
How do we know where we are going is allowable
To reach this spiritual core
One must first traverse to the outer regions and explore
It matters whether you and I or fear is running the show
We must travel within to reach our goal
Once we reach our spiritual center
There will only be peace allowed to enter
Here is where our soul resides
With a deep internal peace of mind inside
Copyright ©
Willofree
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2005-09-02 12:46:32]
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Re: The Search Within
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 12:54:52 PM AEST
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What a great tale of inner struggle and the search to find inner peace.
Well thought out and presented!
Bravo!! |
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Re: The Search Within
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by justme03 on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 01:14:07 PM AEST
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| o YA! i liked this one! So incredibley imaginative wording and great ryhmms (i cant spell =/ lol) loved this! :D w00 h00! *huggles* |
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Re: The Search Within
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 01:27:11 PM AEST
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... It matters whether you and I or fear is running the show ...
Is there a word missing in that line ?
It seems to me that there was supposed to be a NOT in there ... it matters not ...
i could be reading it wrong i s'pose.
Great idea and write though, cool rhyme patternings and word choice.
D.Sapelo
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Re: The Search Within
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by just-b on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 02:23:31 PM AEST
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| nicely done.. I really was into your poem while reading it |
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Re: The Search Within
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 04:33:33 PM AEST
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| very well written poem i liked it alot...i know how it feels to be struggling with life and trying to find peace. i hope you find peace soon keep it up |
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Re: The Search Within
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 04:48:03 PM AEST
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How very true indeed! This write really touched me Will...I love the thought you put into this, and the style you wrote it with.
Very insightful piece, that flowed well. Keep it up!!
Scorp. |
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Re: The Search Within
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by blowfish_jane on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 09:50:37 AM AEST
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Will this was a splendid and very insightful piece of poetry.
You have done something wonderful and I thank you for sharing it.
Jane~
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Re: The Search Within
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by n2dep2care on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 01:27:47 PM AEST
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What a beautiful showcase for the struggle within. I can very much relate and believe you have done a wonderful piece on the condition of winning freedom, over the fear of the unknown. Your carefully chosen words have captured the emotion. Well done!
Laurie |
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Re: The Search Within
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by Archie on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 08:20:39 PM AEST
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| I agree with you on this. You have a very good poem here. |
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