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Me or You?
Contributed by
black_star
on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 07:13:58 AM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I feel that nothing’s working,
I feel there is no sound,
And when I try to rise up high,
I crash back to the ground.
I’m not myself – I haven’t been,
I feel that I am blind,
And when I try to sleep at night,
These thoughts swim though my mind.
But while I black and blunder,
And while I close my eyes,
I promise myself I’ll be me,
Although my inside cries.
I can not see why people change,
But one of them is me.
Take my advice: don’t change yourself,
Or you’ll be first to flee.
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2005-09-02 07:13:58]
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Re: Me or You?
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by Caged Soul on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 09:46:54 AM AEST
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It's funny that you would write this poem cuz I was thinking about the same thing just yesterday. The way I see it is that you are who you are, not by accident, but purposely to fullfill the destiny for which you were born. All I can say is be you, no matter how messed up you think you are, and i know it is so cliche', but in the end it all will work out.
Keep that soul fire burning. |
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Re: Me or You?
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by Allofyourtears on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 01:34:05 PM AEST
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Amazing poem. I like the rhyme scheme because it's simple but it works really well with your theme.
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