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A silence from beyond........
Contributed by
brew
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Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 10:13:27 PM in AEST
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As, a hush feel amoung the crowd
The curtain began to open.................
The dark stage, where the peformers had stood before
Now stood one lonely dancer
She in a pure white leotard, with silver, and satin bows
Her body was all of glisten, as the beaded sweat left her brow
She knew this was the last time, she would dance
Taking one hand, and lifting in the air, the concerto began
Mozart of all pieces...........in d,e,and b minor
The hardest of all, to perform the final
Music grew louder, and she paused for a moment..........
Looking in the crowd, she needed to see the bright, light which had lead her to awe
There; it was there.........yet it did not seem to notice the dancer
The heart, needing it more than ever
Would it see, and lead her to the final.......with no faults?!
Only the one who held the bright, and guided light.......could tell..................
The music ends....................and all is back to a hush.!
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Re: A silence from beyond........
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by Kano on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 10:55:01 PM AEST
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| Very good brew, like all of your other poems. I like your work very much. |
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Re: A silence from beyond........
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 11:07:01 PM AEST
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Very nicely done, I love the imagery, its nice and strong... just right. I love it. Thanks for sharing.
Take Care
- Becca |
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Re: A silence from beyond........
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by Darkhorse71 on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 12:57:51 AM AEST
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awesome write brew, the emotions were palpable and it was very visual. 5+
peace, john |
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Re: A silence from beyond........
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 01:51:31 AM AEST
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and yet in your heart the music only begins as is with your journey of life, and this is lovely, stylish, and imaginative to say the least, consistant through out . . .
Ben |
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Re: A silence from beyond........
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 05:07:55 PM AEST
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Hang in there, take in a giant big breath.. That bright light is somewhere in the crowd.
I doubt this will be your last dance, and you won't dance alone, and the music will be very loud.
Beautifully written.. Sad.. too..
The yet word brings hope.
Raquel Leah :D |
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Re: A silence from beyond........
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 08:29:57 PM AEST
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Beautiful sadness my friend-
I have been know to love Mozart of all
the classical greats-
Yours-
B |
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