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Disregarded
Contributed by
kamelion
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Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 08:03:14 PM in AEST
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It seems as if there is nothing I can ever do to please you
Does it hurt your ear to hear me speak?
Am I never to make a point?
You make me exhausted in most ways
When you entered my life, I thought better days has come
Now only with more pressure
Never the right temperature, so cold, so cold, now it’s all too old
Even spring as sprung. With I a cloudy day a waiting to pour.
My spirit as been lead to stray, wondering if
If only I hadn’t of met you. Would I be happy?
Truly happy never to be pleased
For I judge how it is you judge me
Compliments accompanied with insults
Makes me wonder what will be the end results
I’m like a waterfall beating against a rock
Yet so sensitive, too sensitive and delicate for you
Am I to be like the unseen steel you lock me in?
So tired is I to utter anymore
One must think I stutter, for a sentence cant even leave my mouth
There is harshness to block it
Pushing it right back down my throat
You got me taking forbidden oaths. What is this I owe?
You criticize and degrade and now it makes me wonder
What? What mistake is this I have made?
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kamelion
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2005-09-01 20:03:14]
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Re: Disregarded
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 08:06:51 PM AEST
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| every one makes mistakes and has regrets and if you are unhappy dont regret not ending it and do so |
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Re: Disregarded
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by trini on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 08:12:10 PM AEST
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voices need to heard not silenced. speak up or break up. there is no need for this anguish
nice write tho.
-trini |
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Re: Disregarded
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by kamelion on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 08:49:43 PM AEST
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| we all make mistakes...But these words I write have been one of lifes few lessons to give..I must say I have been thought. |
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Re: Disregarded
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by brew on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:33:55 PM AEST
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I beleive , we all should speak. Um.think of it.Communication is the MOST important in a realtionship.......if you havent that..........what do you have...........well.....I wont go there.lol Very good write. Speak your mind.
Brew~ |
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