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Contributed by
FleurdeSang
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Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 04:14:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Why look into the distance,
If your eyes know there will only be memories embellished with white tears?
Ah, but I cannot paint you with mere shades of gray, darling manifestation,
I cannot gaze and ponder just what precise color the wind is,
The softness of your lips, the luminescent caresses of your eyes,
Because they are only vague illusion,
Yet, like air,
I breathe you,
I breathe the recollections, and the sadness, and the ephemeral joy...
My lungs are flooding with the ghost of your essence,
My throat thirsting for a more quenching liquid,
Other than your tears with the after taste of infidelity...
My hands…
Oh, these filthy… beautiful… hands,
Lamenting words the color of silent misery,
Apologizing all the while for the not-so-false lies...
And I ask you, mirror,
What hidden flower of desire will bloom within my heart,
Weeping black solitude as the silhouette of a past… (was it love?) dies,
And a new dream rises from the ashes?
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
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2005-09-01 16:14:52]
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Re: Questions
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by trixxx on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 06:37:48 PM AEST
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very nice one, the colour leitmotif is full-on
got a good solid feeling out of it, well done and keep it up |
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Re: Questions
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by kamelion on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 08:37:53 PM AEST
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| I like it. the formation of your words are placed in a way I am currently trying to form with my own writng...however very nice expressions. |
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Re: Questions
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by trini on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:29:24 PM AEST
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:) that was very well written. the wording flowed so smoothly. keep up the good work. i look forward to seeing more
-trini |
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Re: Questions
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:33:29 PM AEST
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Amazing............your writing is very unique!!!
YOu have a brilliant style..and never seize to captivate my mind and senses...your astounding!!!
I really enjoy your poetry....I'm keen to see more!
This was awesome! |
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Re: Questions
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 01:11:49 AM AEST
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Beautiful Poem, such questions in time they shall all be answered another treasure to behold.
((((((Stephy))))))
Ben |
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Re: Questions
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:32:47 AM AEST
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Beautiful touched with hidden pain and sorrow.
Love Angelxxxx |
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Re: Questions
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 08:13:33 PM AEST
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Wow what a poetic masterpiece Steph the
imagery in this is truly powerful and one
cannot help, but to feel the emotions that fill
this write. I just loved it all and I have no doubt
said this numerous times about your works
of art, but nothing I can say could do this
justice. Truly beautiful.
Bobo (Joel) |
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