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Valley of Tears
Contributed by
Dot
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Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
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Dear child, you bear many burdens today,
Your soul's in the depths of despair.
You feel so alone, no one cares, you say,
You've reached the limit of what you can bear.
Come, follow me through the valley of tears,
'Tis a cupful of sadness, indeed.
Look beyond your hour; set aside your fears.
We are spectators only in this garden;
A garden of children in need.
Observe little Emily; swinging so high,
She could not possibly know that;
She's in training to fly;
Away from her Dad who loves her so much,
To the garden beyond;
And with just one touch,
She'll be able to walk, she'll be able to see;
The beautiful Eden, prepared by me.
He would have carried her always;
Through tears he'll not be able to see;
Into my tomorrow, just how perfect she will be.
Perhaps you will choose to go out of your way,
I'll carry your burdens just for today.
He'll need someone; I've chosen you,
to walk by his side and carry him through.
Walk unencumbered hereafter, my child,
Give no thought for tomorrow.
Learn to consider your brother's mile,
Pray for all human kind in sorrow.
Each child in this garden,
Has a similar story,
Happiness and sadness will be explained in glory.
Very soon these babes will make heaven sing,
They're angels-in-waiting;
Waiting for wings.
Copyright ©
Dot
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2003-01-15 18:00:00]
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Re: Valley of Tears
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 06:07:52 PM AEST
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Soo full of inspiration Dot you have outdone yourself on this write girl....such beauty in here ....it has sadness to it yet it's very soothing to read....brought tears to my eyes....love it..
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Re: Valley of Tears
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by Dot on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 06:18:10 PM AEST
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| Oh, Oreo, I just came on line to check to see if my new poem had been posted. It had, and there was 1 comment. I knew before I came to my poetry page that the first comment would come from you. You are such a faithful encourager. I really mean that. You encourage me to dig deeper inside myself and pour out my heart. Bless you. Love to you, Dot |
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Re: Valley of Tears
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by Dot on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 06:19:38 PM AEST
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| Oh, Oreo, I just came on line to check to see if my new poem had been posted. It had, and there was 1 comment. I knew before I came to my poetry page that the first comment would come from you. You are such a faithful encourager. I really mean that. You encourage me to dig deeper inside myself and pour out my heart. Bless you. Love to you, Dot |
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Re: Valley of Tears
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 08:05:05 PM AEST
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Dot,this poem really got to me! It was so beautifully done,You have a huge heart!
I loved every word,so inspiring to hear!
Thanks for sharing this great peice!
Christina |
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Re: Valley of Tears
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by Jj on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 08:14:43 PM AEST
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| I absolutely love this poem my friend will enjoy it she needs to read this and become even closer with the father |
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Re: Valley of Tears
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by Chrissie on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 06:04:35 PM AEST
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Dot, this is an absolutely beautiful poem...quite breathtaking. I'm very moved by it.
Chrissie x |
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Re: Valley of Tears
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 12th February 2003 @ 11:08:36 AM AEST
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| beautiful:) |
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Re: Valley of Tears
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by riverofwords on
Monday, 17th February 2003 @ 09:57:04 AM AEST
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waht a beautiful beautiful work ..nothing more to be said
awesome
peace be yuor journey
terry |
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Re: Valley of Tears
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by frozensuicide on
Monday, 24th March 2003 @ 05:56:15 PM AEST
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| hm, i like this one, and especially the title. this is really nice, and full of sorrow and passion. thank you for sharing. |
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