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~*WhY*~
Contributed by
chaos_01
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Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 06:04:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Such news I received
Days weeks and months went by
Pain was getting to the point where is was unbearable
So many tears reached the floor
I watched as you slowly slipped from my grasp
When I was young I lied next to you and I listened to you breath
I watched your chest rise and sink
I held your warm hand which was twined in mine
Now I lay next to you I can’t hear you breathe
Your chest still
Your hand cold
I try and wake you and tell u to breath
You won’t move
I rub your hand to make it warm but it stays as
Cold as ice
I whisper to you
“MUM PLEASE DON’T LEAVE ME I NEED YOU”
But maybe it was time for you to leave as you fought from so
Many months and years
Take a penny on your way and enter the gates of heaven
~~~REST IN PEACE MUM~~~
~~~I LOVE YOU~~~
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Re: ~*WhY*~
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 06:33:43 AM AEST
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oh my , tears.. “MUM PLEASE DON’T LEAVE ME I NEED YOU”
But maybe it was time for you to leave as you fought from so
Many months and years
Take a penny on your way and enter the gates of heaven
why is correct. I pray for your news.. so sad. I pray, ok.. I just pray.
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Re: ~*WhY*~
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by Maxximus on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 09:59:06 AM AEST
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| Heartfelt and honest- there's power behind these words. Stay strong and hold onto your memories- keep up the good work. |
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Re: ~*WhY*~
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by Destined_for_this on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 11:20:44 AM AEST
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| I am sorry for your loss. I would not know what to do if this happened to me. I think that the poem itself needs a little finishing touch though. All in all well felt. |
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Re: ~*WhY*~
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 02:58:40 PM AEST
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| i am so sorry about your news...so sad...it is a huge strenth to be able to express this through your words, especially as well as you did..i don't know what i would do if i recieved this news...this was an amazing write.. you are in my thoughts and prayers.... |
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