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Distance
Contributed by
NoSaint
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Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 11:48:37 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Distance
Emptiness
Lost
Once thought forever
Groping
Trying
Holding
While pulling away
Twisted
Turning
Swirling
Finally see truth
Not you
But me
Who put
Space between us
Copyright ©
NoSaint
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2005-08-31 23:48:37]
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Re: Distance
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 11:52:14 PM AEST
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| I like it, and I guess in a lot of ways I can relate, really good write, can't wait to see more. |
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Re: Distance
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by venkat on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 02:16:21 AM AEST
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| Brief but it has a lot of meaning and life's experience. Expert expression:-)venkat |
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Re: Distance
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by Destined_for_this on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 10:09:11 AM AEST
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| It is decent. LIke said before very brief, but not bad. |
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Re: Distance
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by orgygirl on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 06:33:26 PM AEST
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| I know this feeling of longing, I wish this write was longer because I enjoyed it so much. |
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