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Natures Blind Eye Towards Humanity
Contributed by
Vampire_Slander
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Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 07:42:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
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This storm plays havoc on minds of man
a crazed wake of consumption
swelling tyrant continues to destroy
no calmness of mortality
this eve begins the an apocalyptic fury
one gentle spirit has turned rouge
mother natures tears flood those who walk on her soil
earth trembles and the steam of tragedy arise
damnation never looked so good until now
those who flee shall not be safe
a fusion of blizzard and wave narrow their escape
dreamers now sleep sounder in grave
pledged by tempest and demons in man
this world decays with its final hours
chaos in its simplest form
a darkness have webbed it way over sky
no light can pierce this barrier
as the storm commits its horrendous deeds
Humanity, mother natures ugliest scar
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2005-08-31 19:42:32]
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Re: Natures Blind Eye Towards Humanity
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by hunterj2k on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 07:56:21 PM AEST
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| "Humanity, mother nature's ugliest scar." This line sums up the whole poem. The bluntness of it just works for the whole poem. I love it. |
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Re: Natures Blind Eye Towards Humanity
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 09:29:41 PM AEST
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yes the recent floods have been a tragedy....and you did well to convey the hurt....sadness and bitterness due to the one we call "mother nature"
your words were powerful and written with great poise.
Well done! |
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