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Dancing With Wolves
Contributed by
gwenevere
on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 06:26:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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In the woods I hear a howl,it calls out hauntingly
And suddenly I realise,it's calling out to me
A call that is so beautiful,it pulls me ever near
I move on slowly forward, so my vision is more clear
I see a path, a clearing, a fire burns slow and strong
Around it stand sweet chestnut tree's, stood there for ages long
And circling the fire, I see, with wonder and with awe
A pack of wolves a dancing, there coats so white, so pure
Their moves are so majestic, a vision of such grace
I watch them with excitement, such joy upon my face
They beckon me to join them, as slowly I advance
And feel such deep elation, as I join them in the dance
The air is fired with passion and such primeval power
We dance and dance together, until the midnight hour
My body calm and filled with peace, I lay me down to sleep
And as I gently slumber, the wolves they slowly creep
Away to their true homeland, to roam and hunt and play
I hope that I will find them and dance again one day
Until then I will,listen each day at evenings fall
For the sound that beckons me, the sweetest sound of all
Copyright ©
gwenevere
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2005-08-31 18:26:40] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Dancing With Wolves
(User Rating: 1 ) by brew on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 06:58:12 PM AEST (User
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Wolves are very beautiful animals. Dangerous, yet so gentle. Nice post.
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Re: Dancing With Wolves
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 09:47:08 PM AEST (User
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What an eminant beats of nobility r wolves
and such a flight of tradition that carries me
away when i read your poetry pictures of a
time when all was none but stars and a fire
and magic spells, u r glorious in your writting
so imaginative and dream like . . .
Ben |
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Re: Dancing With Wolves
(User Rating: 1 ) by NoSaint on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 11:51:39 PM AEST (User
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a beautiful vision this brings to mind...
Shari |
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Re: Dancing With Wolves
(User Rating: 1 ) by Bruce on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 12:09:03 AM AEST (User
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A TRULY BEAUTIFUL WRITE |
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Re: Dancing With Wolves
(User Rating: 1 ) by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 01:53:31 AM AEST (User
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a great and trulu nice write
you really are such lady |
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Re: Dancing With Wolves
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kano on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 06:05:09 AM AEST (User
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Wolves have been my favorite animal since I was a boy, I had a face to face with one once and I have been hooked ever since. They are very majestic animals and you did an excellent job describing them with this poem. Probably my favorite I have ever read on here. |
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Re: Dancing With Wolves
(User Rating: 1 ) by doug on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 12:45:10 PM AEST (User
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Free , pure, strong and fearless.
Never denying its true nature , never second guessing its actions. Never bound by imaginary borders. Never caught in human delusions. How sweet to tear away our own fears and fences and live pure and free away from our fancy make believe world. Now you've done it.... you've went and inspired me.
Be fearless because fortune favors the bold.
love , doug |
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