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My dearest poem
Contributed by
gary
on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 05:59:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The joy of loss is far from now.
Trickles from my cheeks, my eyes
bloody and in pain.
Tears as jewels within candle light.
Browns and yellows light pinks and reds.
Each spates thirsting for knowledge.
Hence my height is exposed.
One to another, can not fulfill.
Alone is my farthest snowflake.
My joys crystallize words incompletely felt.
Diamonds, that can not be joined together again.
Copyright ©
gary
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2005-08-31 17:59:26] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: My dearest poem
(User Rating: 1 ) by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 09:45:44 PM AEST (User
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i love your choice of words and the imagery...it really transfixed me....especially the first line...written so well..
Thought-provoking words.......but beautiful.
Great to read. |
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