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SCREAMING
Contributed by
blue_angel
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Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:57:40 PM in AEST
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SHOUTS of lonliness
SHOUTS of pain
SCREAMS of agony
SCREAMS of vain
CRIES of sorrow
CRIES of regret
CALLING of remorse
CALLING to forget
SICK or crying
SICK of tears
ECHOS of silence
and ECHOS of fear
SHOUTS of misery
falling short of breath
i find myself alone
SCREAMING for death
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Re: SCREAMING
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by POETICALLY-INCLINED on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 05:00:58 PM AEST
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| Short, sweet, simple as well as multi-dementional, I love it. I like this poem and thats to be honest. It means a lot to me because lately thats exactly how I feel. |
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Re: SCREAMING
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by justme03 on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 05:15:00 PM AEST
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awesome! i love the way u cappatalized SHOUT and SCREAM...
its so cool
this is how i used to feel at times
peace b with u and keep it up with the awesome poems
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Re: SCREAMING
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 05:56:54 PM AEST
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| thats a great poem...and ive felt like i wanted it all to go away and not have people no that you hurt inside...keep it up!!!! |
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Re: SCREAMING
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 09:52:47 PM AEST
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so much emotion!!!!
Well done, a very simple poem but very powerful and captivating indeed...the last line was awesome.
Timeless piece, be proud! |
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Re: SCREAMING
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by sprinter27 on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 10:59:19 PM AEST
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oh... wow. i like this one, jennie. and i'm screaming right next to you. we'll have to help each other out. take care. see you soon!! keep up the great work!
~sprints |
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Re: SCREAMING
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by fancydreamer78 on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 01:12:47 AM AEST
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| very powerful and home hitting |
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