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Beauty & The Beast
Contributed by
pixie
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Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 01:48:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Beauty and the beast rolled into one,
It isn’t easy and it isn’t fun,
One minute beauty is calm,
Next the beast inflicts her great harm.
Love and hate locked in one mind,
Always looking for a way out of this bind,
One extreme forced by another,
One minute fighters then the next lovers.
Fear and love side by side,
Vulnerabilities lay bare with nowhere to hide,
The saint bound to the sinner,
The expert cast with the beginner.
Opposite sides of the coin,
Yet together they do join,
In pure hate and pure fear,
Keeping their distance yet always feeling near.
Beauty and the beast that is me,
Look hard as it’s not easy to see,
Behind my mask lies a great hurt,
So great it leaves my soul weeping in the dirt.
Copyright ©
pixie
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2005-08-31 13:48:01]
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Re: Beauty & The Beast
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by Vampirequeen on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 02:06:15 PM AEST
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Awww pixie girl I hope things will look up for you soon .
I know you have been struggling with this for quite a while.
if you ever need to talk let me know.
love and hugs |
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Re: Beauty & The Beast
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by lostinmyself on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 03:35:20 PM AEST
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Oh Krissie...
I believe, that everyone is beautiful, but also that they have your 'beast' in them. It's not wrong. It's normal.
I like this, your writes are always so real.
Great write hunni,
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: Beauty & The Beast
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by brew on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 03:48:22 PM AEST
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Very beautiful write, with inner sad. ! Things have to go down, before they can rise. ! Hey, keep smiling, and look forth.! I tell my self that all the time.! Cant always get the best of both worlds, yet we can keep trying.!
Brew~ |
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Re: Beauty & The Beast
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:03:29 PM AEST
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Krissie, this is completely you. Your a beautiful woman with a beastly spirit in you.
I agree with Phil, you do write the most honest poems in the site. And it's been a pleasure reading all of it.
Hugs,
Jane!~ |
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Re: Beauty & The Beast
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by eatfresh22 on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:04:49 PM AEST
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You depicted your internal paradox very well. Very strong poem, full of confusion and contradictory feelings. Exactly what you were trying to portray, I think. Nicely done.
~Carrie~ |
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Re: Beauty & The Beast
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:26:22 PM AEST
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Pixie, I always relate to your poetry very well in some way. It's eerie because your poems seem to coincide with the happenings in my life, though they're most likely about totally different things.
This is greatly expressive. A little choppier than your usual self, but still wonderful.
Love and peace,
Chelsea |
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Re: Beauty & The Beast
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:39:39 PM AEST
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Wow !! That is too true of many people. Well ... everybody really. We all have that darker side of our personas that makes up who we are. In many cases that part of us is necessary. I like to think if I keep it fed, warm, and satiated then it will be there when I find need of it.
D.Sapelo
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Re: Beauty & The Beast
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:06:11 PM AEST
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A gem of a poem a lovers conflict and let's
not for get the ever present peace maker who
simply goes by the name of, true love, lovely
writting as always pix . . .
(((((pixie))))))
Ben |
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Re: Beauty & The Beast
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by Doriens_Picture on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 01:59:55 AM AEST
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i miss you so much
never see you on any more
just remmember im always your friend |
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Re: Beauty & The Beast
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by Willofree on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 11:46:22 AM AEST
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Pixie, it's good to see you posting a poem again, it seems like a long time. I love the title of this poem; and how masterfully you put it together. One of your best, I think!
Hope ypu keep writing,
Will |
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Re: Beauty & The Beast
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by sweetangeluk on
Monday, 5th September 2005 @ 06:52:27 AM AEST
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Fantastic write. Nice to see you back in top form
Love Angelxxx |
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Re: Beauty & The Beast
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 09:26:14 AM AEST
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you are a really talented writter. this was amazing and it was beautifully written. it flowed smoothly and it read perfect. I liked this alot..
christina |
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