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sunday in albufeira
Contributed by
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 04:00:00 PM in AEST
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Sunday In Albufeira
As we elderly and swaybacked sat at the south
wall of a hotel enjoying sun and sea a rusty,
u-boat surfaced and came to rest on the sandy
beach. Her captain rolled up his trousers legs
and waded ashore went to the bar where people
said hallo thought that he was an actor making
a war movie. He asked to borrow the phone but
couldn’t reach the embassy he tried to call.
A calendar on the wall said 2003. The captain
looked back to his ship his crew had gathered on
her deck squinting at the sun, they where so very
white, had seaweed for hair and over them hung
a phosphorous light. They didn’t belong here in
fact they where 58 years late and had children
older than themselves. Somehow they had been
caught in a time warp and washed up here on
the shores of peace, he had to go back out there
to the deep ocean and help them find the year 1945.
Copyright ©
Jan_Oskar_Hansen
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2003-01-15 16:00:00]
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Re: sunday in albufeira
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 05:59:32 PM AEST
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Ooo what a cute little fantasized poem you have here jan....first thing this made me think of was "They went through the Bermuda Triangle" somehow and made it out lmao....this is beautiful ...love it...thanks for sharing it girl...
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Re: sunday in albufeira
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 18th May 2004 @ 12:58:48 PM AEST
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