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EYES WIDE SHUT.........(thought this was a good title)
Contributed by
brew
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Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 11:07:43 AM in AEST
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Closing the eyes, Why would one do that?
It has been shown there is a new way
A new cross road.........And much to learn
All can not be the easy way
We all find obstacles that make or break us
As we stumble and fall
We then, pick our self up,
Brush off the dirt, and keep goin
There are some things found along the way
Some we hate
Some we do not know what to do with
And then some we want to take and keep..........FOREVER
Is it possible?!
I beleive all things can be........
You just have to want to put enough effort
And it will happen
So do not close the eyes
let them see and feel.............
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brew
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Re: EYES WIDE SHUT.........(thought this was a good title)
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 01:55:31 PM AEST
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very deep and a true write, great work here!!!
pix xx |
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Re: EYES WIDE SHUT.........(thought this was a good title)
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 10:33:43 PM AEST
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A splendid peice of poetry laced with wisdom
and and true delicate insight . . .
Ben |
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Re: EYES WIDE SHUT.........(thought this was a good title)
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by Kano on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 11:41:53 PM AEST
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As we stumble and fall
We then, pick our self up,
Brush off the dirt, and keep going
That is my favorite part reminds me of what my Grandpa used to tell me. "You don't win the buckle if your sitting in the dirt" good poem |
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Re: EYES WIDE SHUT.........(thought this was a good title)
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 08:23:36 PM AEST
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What an honest and most heartfelt thought Brew-
I totaly agree..
all things are possible-
Yours-
B |
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Re: EYES WIDE SHUT.........(thought this was a good title)
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by remote on
Tuesday, 13th September 2005 @ 07:17:19 AM AEST
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And then some we want to take and keep..........FOREVER
Is it possible?!
Like all things, including the life that we have, must slip from our hands, some sooner, some later. Forever is a very long time. |
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Re: EYES WIDE SHUT.........(thought this was a good title)
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by SunflowersAndTea on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 09:58:35 PM AEST
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| wow. this is wonderful....it's beautifully written, i love the way it flows into the theme...kudos! |
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