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Time
Contributed by
black_star
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Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 06:03:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Time is like the air we breathe,
The water and the sun.
We can not live without it,
And we wait for it to come.
Time is like an apple,
When eaten it is lost.
When waiting for the sun to shine,
We’re covered in a frost.
Time is free when mind is wide,
And captured when it’s fake.
When bright it is the ocean,
And when dark it is the lake.
Time can help with thinking,
Time shows who you become.
With time you can do everything,
Be patient, it will come.
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black_star
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Re: Time
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by guiltycircles on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 06:45:42 AM AEST
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| well written thought which evokes thought and emotion |
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Re: Time
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by sprinter27 on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 12:42:39 PM AEST
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oh, great write! it is very true and i liked how you showed it and got the point across! well done, keep it up!
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Re: Time
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 04:21:32 AM AEST
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Refreshingly thoughtful, and thought-provoking. I like how you represent time as something both crutial to us and good for us at the same time (as air and water and the sun). TIme is more often protrayed as a decayer. But this shows more wisdom, and more joy of life. Beautiful.
Andrew |
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