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Good Girl
Contributed by
eleventoedsloth
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Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:05:41 AM in AEST
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I pound on the door.
"Notice me! I'm standing tall, sitting pretty!"
Begging for attention, much like any small animal.
And, that's how I feel.
Less then. Animal.
I do a trick, then wait for the praise, which so quickly passes.
"And she knows how to play dead, too!"
Because she is dead.
Yeah, but no I'm not. Not if you say otherwise.
I sit up, with my arms out lovely.
Pat my head, and tell me I'm good girl.
Like a faithful old doggy, I'll always come back wagging my tail.
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Re: Good Girl
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 07:26:41 PM AEST
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short and sweet...almost comical. Comical, but it gets the serious message across.
absolutely beautiful...never stop writing
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Re: Good Girl
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by KarlaMarie on
Saturday, 3rd June 2006 @ 08:42:05 PM AEST
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Brilliant poem, the messae comes across and even though it is a serious message, it still entertains
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