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Buried Alive
Contributed by
broken_wingz
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Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 03:58:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I close my eyes and sense the dark.
The cold alone of a withering heart.
Silence that shakes the eternal soul.
Knowing never again will I feel whole.
Take my body; this life I live.
For I have nothing left to give.
An empty space is all that's here.
Yet that's the least of the things I fear.
Pull apart the pieces of me.
Maybe then I'll be set free.
Take this pain and let me rise.
No longer will I be buried alive.
Take the burdens you've placed on me.
They are yours alone, not mine to keep.
Let me follow this road alone.
Maybe this path can lead me home.
All I ask is for a place to rest.
A quiet place to catch my breath.
Let me remember all the tears I've cried.
As I give you all this last good-bye.
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Re: Buried Alive
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by ElevenToedSloth on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:07:36 AM AEST
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| This was a really good write. Usually I dislike poetry like this, but not here. Good job, I'm tough to win over =D |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:54:53 AM AEST
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I really liked this.
The rhyme, the rhythm, the flow..
Well done!
Some lovely metaphors used here..
Keep writing, and know there's always hope out there. ^^
~KayT
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Re: Buried Alive
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by guiltycircles on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 07:29:05 AM AEST
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| this is beautiful... |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by Loende on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 06:12:04 AM AEST
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Very well penned, my dear. It called to me and made me ponder. You'll find that place of rest soon, and the tears will be for joy. Job well done.
Loende |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Saturday, 1st October 2005 @ 11:53:35 PM AEST
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| brilliant |
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Re: Buried Alive
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 2nd October 2005 @ 11:15:13 AM AEST
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Deep flow of living in the burning confusion
well done |
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