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FIRST DAY AT SCHOOL.
Contributed by
lillyjane
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Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 03:27:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
schoolproblems
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I still remember it feels like yesterday,when I thought my mum was giving me away,
taken to a building, with little desk and chairs,shiny shoes white socks, ribbons in my hair,
mum led me in a room, a woman took my hand, who are all thease other kids, I didn't understand,
I felt frightened, vulnerable and small, i'll see you later on mum said, its your first day at school,
tears stung my eyes, as mum gave me a kiss, here's your lunch, your soon be used to this,
then she was gone, what did all this mean, was I still tucked up in bed, was it all a dream.
I couldn't play dolls, couldn't have my nap, skip around the garden, sit on my mums lap,
it cant be true, still thought I was dreaming, blinded by my tears, why was that boy screaming,
the smell of pencils, black boards, books and chalk, a strange woman saying please dont talk.
At the time didn't think I would survive, its a lot to take in, when your only five,
sometimes even now, when feeling vulnerable, memory's come flooding back,
of my first day at school.
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lillyjane
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2005-08-31 03:27:40]
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Re: FIRST DAY AT SCHOOL.
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by Manda2 on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 03:21:09 PM AEST
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| I loved this poem, it's true, you never forget your first day at school. I loved all the memories in the poem, I'll never forget the strong smell of pencils. Well done lillyjane, a very good write! |
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Re: FIRST DAY AT SCHOOL.
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by Archie on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 12:40:46 PM AEST
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| This is a cool poem you show the fear and trepidation some kids go through well. It was not like that for me though. |
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Re: FIRST DAY AT SCHOOL.
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by maestar on
Sunday, 25th September 2005 @ 04:08:54 PM AEST
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I agree that school is like that on your first day.
well done very well put.
sorry for the late read, loved it.
Holly-mae :-)
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