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Absence
Contributed by
Inevitable
on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 11:20:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I hold my breath to scream
out loud
I am so hot so cold
Like a lifeless kiss
on the lips
Where he touched her last
I will not go
to him
to be used, to be sold
I was a pawn
an indecent figure
in my own addictions
He played the needle
and lust
was the tourniquet
so tight like
our bodies
entwined
neverending heat
of the moment where
I broke,
my screams
so silent and
tears so
vulnerable
as I crossed the
state of panic
eyes a morbid
color
voice as even
as ever
yet mind
so tortured so
strained as the insides bleed
and he holds me only
to go farther
where I cannot tread
the pain so Dark and new
and Angel's breath in my ear
whispers "The Absence
is love." and I give
no...more
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Inevitable
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2005-08-30 23:20:36]
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Re: Absence
(User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 12:16:25 AM AEST
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wow. this is amazing work. Love the use of words to describe.very engaging and meaningful.
~bb~ |
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Re: Absence
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by Igneous on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 12:39:33 AM AEST
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| good poetry, very sad. I know people in situation that was described in your poem. |
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