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Contributed by
JacobManning
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Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:58:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I need to tell you how I feel,
I need to tell you that I truely care about you,
No matter what happens.
And which ever path you choose,
I know that you would have followed your heart.
And even if I'm not at the end of that path,
You will always be the only one I care about.
I can't say that "I don't care if we don't become closer"
Because I really do
But if we only stay friends and nothing more
That's fine, I can live with that
Because being friends with you
Is the greatest thing I have
But I still want to show you,
That I can and will treat you the better than anyone else has
Because thats what you deserve
I need to show you how I feel
I need to show you that I truely care about you
Copyright ©
JacobManning
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2005-08-30 22:58:35]
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Re: More?
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by Inevitable on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 11:24:45 PM AEST
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| Great poem. I have have feelings for a friend but there's just too much complications, ya know?...keep up the good work |
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by Alibi on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 11:51:16 PM AEST
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How very special. Friends are life's joy. Even better if you two become more. Very nice poem you've written. Good luck!
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by Jenni_K on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 12:04:34 AM AEST
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Good write.... Can identify with this..
Jenni |
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by Igneous on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 12:36:02 AM AEST
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| Good poem. I understand what you mean, you don't know whether to move forward and try to make something more. Or if you did and were rejected, could you still remain friends. Tough thing! |
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:42:18 AM AEST
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Ditto. I can very well relate to this poem.
I'm sorry if it didn't work out, I know its cliché but there is someone out there for us. It just only a matter of time when we meet them.
Jane~
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by Caged Soul on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:50:16 AM AEST
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I'm not really into the whole love poem thing, but I really liked reading this one. I can totally feel what you are saying as I went through the same thing a couple of times and I know it can be hell. Just hang in there.
Peace & love. |
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Re: More?
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 04:41:02 PM AEST
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Couldn't have said it better myself. You should send this to "lifefliesby" for me so I don't have to try and write something better to send him. lol (just a joke).
More raw emotion/thought than poem, but still really good.
Love and peace,
Chelsea |
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