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Downpour
Contributed by
thepizzaguy
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Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:46:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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We ate dinner at Rocky's last night.
All your friends left while you waited for me.
They said you were crazy for waiting,
but you waited anyway.
I finished dinner,
and you looked tired and ready for bed.
So I walked you back to your dorm.
In a torrential downpour, that had been going on all day.
While we were walking,
you asked,
"Why did you walk all the way to Rocky's, in this terrible weather?"
And I held your shivering body against mine.
I answered you,
"Because I wanted to have dinner with you."
I wanted to say something different.
I just wanted to say...
"...I came because you mean more to me than you'll ever know..."
Copyright ©
thepizzaguy
... [
2005-08-30 22:46:59]
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Re: Downpour
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by LostAmbition on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 11:40:17 PM AEST
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| Cool! U should tell her!!! |
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Re: Downpour
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by rockergirl94 on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 12:35:35 AM AEST
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Aww that's really sweet, and I really like how you ended with that line. It almost leaves me feeling sad, but a thoughtful kind of sad.
keep writing, keep hoping
- Julie |
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