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On The Long Road
Contributed by
Kay-Kay
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Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:01:49 PM in AEST
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Im on the long road to somewhere in this life of mine,
Im just tryin to move forward and keep myself in line.
Staying away from the wrong things and trying to do what's right,
I'm on the long road to somewhere and so far everything's alright.
Im on the long road to somewhere, where nothing ever goes bad,
Where everyone is happy and nobody is sad.
A place where everybody's friends and there's no such thing as hate,
Im on the long road to somewhere, where everything is great.
Im on the long road to somewhere to a place that i belong,
A place where i know that everyone will get along.
Where nobody has to hide behind someone they're not,
Im on the long road to somewhere, where everything good is what they got.
Im on the long road to somewhere in a place where the sun always shines,
A wonderful place to be where everything's divine.
I want to go to a place where when i die i can be with my friends,
Im on the long road to somewhere just waiting for my life to end.
Copyright ©
Kay-Kay
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Re: On The Long Road
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by Kano on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:08:16 PM AEST
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| Seems like we are all on that long road to get to that place. Good write I like it |
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Re: On The Long Road
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by helzwar007 on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:31:05 PM AEST
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| hmm this poem makes u think a little... if u ever wanna talk my sn on aim is the same as my sn here... soo yea... but keep writing... good poem... -sa-sa-b00ga-b00ga- |
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Re: On The Long Road
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by Cupid on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:33:02 PM AEST
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All I have to say is that this poem is FABULOUS!
It has been a long time since I read a poem as good as this!
And I don't mean that all the other poems here stink or anything. I just mean that I haven't read any poems.
I was on vacation for two weeks and I haven't read or posted anything until now.
Anyroad, I LUFF this poem!
Please take a look at my poem called, 'I Ran Into Some Trouble On The Road To Nowhere.'
It's kind of the exact opposite of this inspiring and uplifting poem of yours.
All smiles,
Cupid |
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Re: On The Long Road
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 10:20:40 PM AEST
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wonderful self reflection.....i can relate very much to your thoughts and feel I also am walking along some kind of road........trying not to falter much like you...
great write, exceptional rhyming style and written very well...
well done! |
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