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You did me wrong
Contributed by
Rose_bud
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Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 08:48:47 PM in AEST
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After everything, all the ups & downs, & time we spent 2gether we're at our end,
I'm at the point where I don't think my heart can ever truely mend.
Soon, too soon, I'll feel empty & look for someone new,
But it'll be a long time, too long, b4 I can trust, & that's because of you.
you were the only person I ever believed in, the only person I cared for,
& no matter how much I gave you, you always wanted more.
We laughed 2gether, cryed 2gether, grew 2gether, & held each other 2gether,
so many things we discovered 4 the 1st time 2gether & those memories I'll have for-ever
You took everything for granted & walked all over me, when I couldn't see,
you lead me on and made me think you truely cared for me.
After everything you did to me & everything I went through,
you turned your back on me when I really needed you.
That's ****** up, I would of never done you wrong no way no how,
because no one should have to feel the kinda pain I feel now.
& there's nothing that hurts as bad as when you with her is all I see,
you threw everything down the drain & act like you don't even know me.
I love you with all my heart & not one time did I ever think of turning my back on you,
not even after all the **** you put me through
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Rose_bud
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2005-08-30 20:48:47]
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Re: You did me wrong
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by Kano on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:05:09 PM AEST
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| Good poem from the heart, I feel for ya |
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Re: You did me wrong
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by helzwar007 on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:34:58 PM AEST
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| aww sweetie, ive been cheated on... most of this population has been... but its even harder to get over when u were in love... truly in love... and i cant imagine how that feels... i am just here to pray for you in your time of need... -sa-sa-b00ga-b00ga- |
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Re: You did me wrong
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by Alibi on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 12:04:27 AM AEST
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The shortcut's with the slang make this appear a bit juvenile. '&' '1, 2, 3' plus the partially edited curse words.
There's more creative ways to get your point across. Also, 'forever' does not have a hyphen in it!
Keep writing. |
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