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Just The Start

Contributed by sbhottie288 on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 05:17:02 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I do admit I cut
I know this isn’t right
And I know im a nut
But I just want to say night

Im crying and your to blame
This is your fault
This isn’t some game
I wont halt

You left me hurt
And worst of all alone
You made me feel like dirt
Can you hear it in my tone

Cant u hear the way im crying
That this pain wont go away
Inside I am dying
Everything is not okay

Ive never had this much pain
And its something I cant bare
Whats there left to gain
This is something I should not dare

I know you want me to be strong
And I know you want me to stop crying
But this is all wrong
And inside I know im dying

I don’t have a soul
Or even a heart
I want to die in a hole
And that’s just the start




Copyright © sbhottie288 ... [ 2005-08-30 17:17:02]
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Re: Just The Start (User Rating: 1 )
by Kano on Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:47:18 PM AEST
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Painful poem


Re: Just The Start (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 12:27:56 PM AEST
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good, but sad and painful poem. i liked it even thought that's besides the point. i know you don't know me. but, really, you shouldn't inflict pain on yourself. i know how you feel and how much it hurts (i've lost best friends to greater effects). but hurting yourself won't help much, just take the pain down farther. if you need to talk, just PM me. i'll lend an ear for you (well, actually eye in this case... but...) just try not hurting yourself as much. find other ways to express your pain (poetry and music are good starts). just take care of yourself and keep up the good poetry!

sending lots of luck to you!
~sprints




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