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Suspended Animation
Contributed by
necronomy
on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 01:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Suspended Animation
Lying,
Driving,
Sighing,
Blinking,
Not thinking,
A sense of ahead and behind,
Nearness so fleeting,
The in-between places,
And in-between thoughts,
No rest,
Disclosure,
On pause.
Flying,
Trying,
Gliding,
Striding,
Stretching,
Riding,
Reaching,
Breaching
Becoming,
Undone,
Unravelling,
While travelling,
And yet still,
Unmoved,
Undecided,
And unable,
To choose.
Copyright ©
necronomy
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2003-01-15 13:40:00]
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Re: Suspended Animation
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by venkat on
Thursday, 16th January 2003 @ 03:24:01 AM AEST
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| a swift horse..first choose a goal then ride it..ahhhaa.Nice write..venkat |
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Re: Suspended Animation
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by mckayla on
Friday, 17th January 2003 @ 11:36:00 PM AEST
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I liked this poem alot! thank you for sharing it!
mckayla |
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Re: Suspended Animation
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by Fiona on
Sunday, 26th January 2003 @ 04:11:59 AM AEST
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| Wow, I really enjoyed this poem! Great write! |
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Re: Suspended Animation
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 31st January 2003 @ 12:04:23 AM AEST
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| well done:) |
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Re: Suspended Animation
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by karoody on
Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 01:41:43 AM AEST
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so simple, yet so much is said, great!
kara |
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