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WAITING
Contributed by
cutestmofo
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Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 03:29:39 PM in AEST
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WAITING
The clock ticks and the morning goes
Impatient and my frustration grows
Every minute seems to past like a day
But ever second I seem to lose my way
Tick tock and time goes on
Each tick slowly comes along
Each second seems further apart
Like those who suffer from a broken heart
As I wait I see things I’ve never seen before
Like dreary ill fated souls begging for more
And the shackles of life get heavier
And the hollow walls of pain get tighter
But still I wait and wait and wait
Impatient and full of hate
My mind wonders until I’m just an empty shell
Wondering far to find the reason why I fell
Fell into this ticking hell where each tick songs like thunder
But ever more my mind will wonder
I really and truly can’t stand to wait
Waiting seems like an immovable gate
You see all the good things on the other side
They taunt your eyes until your broken and the pain can never subside
But finally the time is up and glory is near
Finally that stupid bus is here
By Kerwin Etienne
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Re: WAITING
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 05:00:45 PM AEST
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Don't tell me you got on the Stupid Bus?
No wait - don't answer that.
This poem should be at least half the size it is. I was waiting for the end, sooner than you were waiting for your bus, I'm afraid.
Keep writing - more economically.
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Re: WAITING
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by Kano on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:44:04 PM AEST
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| ha ha funny ending |
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Re: WAITING
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by LostAmbition on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 11:44:37 PM AEST
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Uh o-kay.
Your really conceited judging by your author's note :D
Keep writing!! |
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