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DREAMS OF RAINDROPS FALLING
Contributed by
robertdavidson
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Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 05:07:16 AM in AEST
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DREAMS OF RAINDROPS FALLING
By Robert Davidson
Dreams of raindrops falling
There’s a tear in my heart for you
Dreams of raindrops falling
For I dreamed your love was true.
You said the other guy meant nothing
But mistrust fills my heart with dread
Oh, you never really convinced me, and
I saw only darkest shadows ahead.
Dreams of raindrops falling
There’s a tear in my heart for you
Dreams of raindrops falling
For I dreamed your love was true.
All my life I’ve been short-changed, and
Had it all blow up in my face instead,
When last night I entered the wrong door
To where you lay in his arms in his bed.
Dreams of raindrops falling?
Yes, there’s a tear in my heart for you.
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robertdavidson
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2005-08-30 05:07:16]
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Re: DREAMS OF RAINDROPS FALLING
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 06:53:52 AM AEST
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Very sad touching write. Even tho it's sad it's well written.
hugs,
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Re: DREAMS OF RAINDROPS FALLING
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 07:39:57 AM AEST
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This so much touched my heart for I could feel ur pain and sadness through each word.
So painfully sad yet written so well. May things brighten up for u.
Hugs,
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Re: DREAMS OF RAINDROPS FALLING
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by MorningDove on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 09:17:16 PM AEST
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I don't quite remember when morals left our society and where they went too. This is an all too often happening. I am sorry for your pain.
I do have to say this would make perfect lyrics for a song.
Rita |
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Re: DREAMS OF RAINDROPS FALLING
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by hunterj2k on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 01:17:43 AM AEST
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Dreams of raindrops falling
There’s a tear in my heart for you
Dreams of raindrops falling
For I dreamed your love was true. . .
I love the repitition of this stanza. Wonderful poem! |
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Re: DREAMS OF RAINDROPS FALLING
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by blowfish_jane on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 07:16:43 AM AEST
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Im so sorry for your pain, but i agree with Rita. This would make a wonderful song.
Dreams of raindrops falling
There’s a tear in my heart for you
Dreams of raindrops falling
For I dreamed your love was true.
Thats such a good verse. I adore it.
Jane~ |
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Re: DREAMS OF RAINDROPS FALLING
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by candysears on
Monday, 26th September 2005 @ 08:43:42 PM AEST
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Very good....I really like this one
God Bless |
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Re: DREAMS OF RAINDROPS FALLING
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by SIMMI on
Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 04:03:51 PM AEST
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WOW DATS DEEP
I LIKE IT THOUGH
A TEAR IN MA HEART 4 U
I LOVE IT |
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