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**Empty hands**
Contributed by
lollypopxcore
on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 10:25:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Now im up against a locker,
with your face in front of me.
Your arms around me tightly,
and i can barely breathe.
I then begin to cry,
because your going out with her.
It's just the way things are,
and you love her, that'sfor sure.
My heart was rather empty,
before i put it in your hands.
This is something precious...
can you try to understand.
..Then you let out a breathe,
just before i said goodbye.
no more empty nightmares,
how could you let this die?
Copyright ©
lollypopxcore
... [
2005-08-29 22:25:57]
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Re: **Empty hands**
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by sick_n_twisted on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 10:39:21 PM AEST
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my heart was just pounding and there was a lump in my throat well done i no one can ever make me cry...lol....i really love this poem...i know how you feel this happened to me before my ex bf has a new gf and it tore me apart...but im over it now...im sure you'll get over it too...
xoxo
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Re: **Empty hands**
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by glassicallyunsuperficial on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 12:17:32 AM AEST
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This is a great, simple and real poem.I really enjoyed reading it...
A good poem doesn't require must vocabs to express the true feel and I think you just captured this entirely...
great work,
-glass |
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Re: **Empty hands**
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 14th September 2005 @ 03:28:46 AM AEST
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Very much from the heart. I'm sorry yours has so much pain.
May it heal.
Take care,
David |
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Re: **Empty hands**
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by tdp on
Saturday, 17th September 2005 @ 07:32:36 PM AEST
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| simply expressive.... I really liked the title as well, very fitting. |
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