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Lost
Contributed by
JacobManning
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Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 10:20:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Should I feel upset, angry, or helpless?
Should I have gone for it when I had the chance?
What did I do wrong?
What didn't I do right?
It has to be my fault.
As long as she's happy...
then I can't complain.
But this pain I feel in my heart...
it hurts so bad.
I guess its true then...
nice guys really do finish last.
Everyone knows...
that I would have done anythng for her...
I would have given her everything....
just to keep a smile on her face...
even if it doesn't involve me at all.
Everything I thought I knew was wrong...
everything I thought would never happen....
happened.
What do I do now?
What can I do now?
What should I do now?
People are telling me to quit...
but i can't.
There are three things I never quit on...
myself...
my friends...
my heart.
Maybe I should cut the list down to two...
but I can't bring myself to do that.
I know that she tried to not hurt my feelings...
but that's just what she did.
Or maybe...
she never figured it out...
that I really care about her...
that would be the worst pain ever.
Copyright ©
JacobManning
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2005-08-29 22:20:26]
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Re: Lost
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by brew on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:38:18 PM AEST
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It happens and im sorry for the loss.............Good post, with true feeeling.
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Re: Lost
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 12:31:58 AM AEST
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Good poem of an unselfish love... You have written so vividly about your emotiions..
Thank you for sharing your heart.
Welcome to YPDC.....hope to see many more..
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