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Darkness Yields
Contributed by
Loende
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Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:50:37 PM in AEST
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I see things that others don't
Empty vessels, soul-less hope
These ghosts that pass me by each day
Their essence fading, bright to grey
Motions made but none by thought
These spectres move, are never caught
I see things that others won't
Walls of fury, built to cope
These shells that pass me by each day
Their nature beaten, lead astray
Decisions made but none by will
These shadows dwell with hate to fill
I see things that others miss
The echo of a lover's kiss
These hearts that pass me by each day
Their spirit broken, flayed away
Judgements made but none by choice
These wraiths remain with silent voice
I see things that others should
When nothing works, but God's love would
These souls that pass me by each day
Their hearts now full, they find their way
Though fear persists as we live on
Darkness always yields to the dawn.
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Loende
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Re: Darkness Yields
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by Perfectly_flawed on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 09:53:18 PM AEST
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| I've got one word: wow. I think this has got to be my favorite of the numerous I have read today. I love your style, and every word just dances together beautifully. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Darkness Yields
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by xxbreathlessx on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 10:05:25 PM AEST
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| wow, this was powerful and quite an eye opener, you did a great job. i espeially liked the third stanza, its really well written and portrays such a vivd image to me. awesome job. |
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Re: Darkness Yields
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 12:02:50 AM AEST
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Well now, that is poetry! I'm impressed by the styling, which worked very well, and still more by the perceptiveness, the truth underlying these musings. Well penned, my friend!
*applauding*
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Re: Darkness Yields
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by Spike on
Tuesday, 6th September 2005 @ 09:28:16 AM AEST
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Unfortunately ,someone has already said 'wow', which was my first choice. How about 'HOLY MOLEY!!!!!!' I think I've found the poet I've been searching for in all those long trawls through adolescent suicide poetry and irregular syntax.
bellissimo, fantastico, bloody good.
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Re: Darkness Yields
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by Wachumiri on
Wednesday, 28th September 2005 @ 05:32:50 AM AEST
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You just had to put your name in it, didn't you? Well done, Dawn, great poem.
Take care.
David |
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Re: Darkness Yields
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 1st October 2008 @ 04:11:28 PM AEST
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Dawn~
My dear poetess. I came back to your earlier writes
to read, soak in and learn so much from. I take so
much in from your writes. My mind is fully stimulated
and I am left in awe after reading your wonderful writings
my dear friend. You are truly gifted and we are privileged
that you share your brilliant poetry with us~
a huge fan,
dreamer |
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Re: Darkness Yields
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2008 @ 08:51:12 AM AEST
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| a poem making a powerful statement about society, i sense. it is very articulate and well written and demonstrates your extraordinary ability. good stuff. |
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Re: Darkness Yields
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by elle on
Tuesday, 5th May 2009 @ 07:11:48 PM AEST
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| in a word. . .exceptional. . ! peace. elle |
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