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here we are
Contributed by
electrique_poet
on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:27:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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here we are
waist to waist
tied together at the head,
theres no going left if you cant go
right
theres no innoscence to cover your sinful
fight
with bare knuckled fists
and a tooth to decay
shes gone;oblivion
is where i stand-is where i
watch;i perform the
task of the clock as
the racers rev their engines;
countdown from 3,
t-minus green, then
we will play a game of checkers to see
whos king
here we are
hand in hand
severed by our useless plans;
if only you had prayed last nite
perhaps youd regain your sight
so lets get you a new time,
and i want to see some speed,you know
(i only condescend because
i like to pretend im
important
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electrique_poet
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Re: here we are
(User Rating: 1 ) by KarlaMarie on
Wednesday, 31st May 2006 @ 07:55:52 PM AEST (User
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i read it twice because it is very confusing and sent my head into a spin...
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Re: here we are
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 2nd June 2006 @ 07:28:39 PM AEST (User
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as the other commenter said...it was a bit confusing. but - it was still amazing...and i loved it
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