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Girl In the Mirror
Contributed by
HiDdEnTEARS
on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 07:49:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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I look in the mirror,
What do I see?
A girl staring back,
that girl, it's not me.
She's beautiful
on her face lies a smile.
A glow in her eyes,
like to the world she's worth while.
The tint in her smile,
says "look at me, i'm fine."
Tears down her cheeks?
There is no sign.
This girl has the life,
everyone wishes they had.
The friends and the guys,
both a mom and a dad.
So how is it now,
can someone explain?
That I got handed the glory,
attention and fame?
I bet noone knows,
the real me, I fight.
And how the girl in the mirror,
disappears at night.
Copyright ©
HiDdEnTEARS
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2005-08-29 19:49:10]
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Re: Girl In the Mirror
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by needs_change on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:48:57 PM AEST
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| so very true. i love it. |
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Re: Girl In the Mirror
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by Sadone2 on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 09:58:13 PM AEST
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SO real. i can truly relate. maybe you can PM me sometime so we can talk. anyway, great poem keep up the good work
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Re: Girl In the Mirror
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by emokid on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 10:18:25 PM AEST
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I've been there sweetheart and If no one knows then no one can help you let your friends and family help you they will if they truly do love you anyways good write keep up the good work
Ian the emokid |
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Re: Girl In the Mirror
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 03:46:33 PM AEST
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Sometimes the only person that knows the real "you" is yourself.
Great write
Steve |
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Re: Girl In the Mirror
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by EverlastingDawn on
Sunday, 19th February 2006 @ 08:10:39 PM AEST
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I really liked the poem
There was really good flow
And the emotions were prominent
Nice Write
~Dawn |
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