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Im Ready now
Contributed by
Black_Rainbow
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Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:17:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Staring at the mirror,
Couldn’t let anybody see,
They shouldn’t know,
They couldn’t know,
The person that lurks inside.
A person full of sadness,
Full of pain and hate.
Nothing but an empty,
Hollow shell.
But then I found the key,
To this wounded soul.
I then unlocked the gateway,
And let you walk right through.
You helped relieve the pain,
the aching deep inside.
My world was then enlightened,
With the love so pure
And true, that neither
Highest height or
Deepest depth could
Ever break it.
I know feel I am finally alive,
I am finally loved and
Instead of staring in the mirror,
I’m staring at the world.
And anything it may fling at me.
Copyright ©
Black_Rainbow
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2005-08-29 18:17:18]
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Re: Im Ready now
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:33:53 PM AEST
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| Very sweet and romantic. I know this feeling very well. Good write |
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Re: Im Ready now
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by hoist1atca on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 07:13:04 PM AEST
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Good Poem-
Mirrors only reflect outer bueaty-
Love often shows the inner bueaty that hides no more-
You no longer into the mirror,yet look into the pool(the eyes)-
The eyes are the windows to the soul...
Joe |
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Re: Im Ready now
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:56:59 PM AEST
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It is truly amazing how one person can change our whole outlook on life and ourselves. Because of his love for you, you found the strength to face the world head on. Nice write. Keep strong.
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