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COMEDY WITH TEARS
Contributed by
Lovingcritters
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Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 05:37:27 PM in AEST
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COMEDY WITH TEARS
A place to call your own,
a beautiful home, memories sewn,
How could we have ever imagined,
all the adventures unknown?
Makes our lives worth living,
unknown futures in the twilight zone?
Exhausted is a word flawed,
a pat on the back, for us applaud!
Packing, cleaning, more packing,
more cleaning.......
and boxes piled high in between.
Let's just sit down for a moment,
rest our 'moving torn' bodies
'twil be most pleasant.
Our little companions stand in awe,
Up, down, all around, active seesaw,
Suddenly from under the bed,
a huge grey monster, well fed!
Half way up the wall, and then
into the bathroom scurrying.
Dogs in pursuit, going faster
than hurrying!!!!
A gorgeous cat, grey as the thick carpet,
hiding under the bed like a bandit.
My beautiful sunken bathtub unused
but not for a bath, a toilet used!!!
Our laughter soon turned to tears.......
Who would leave their beloved pet
behind with all these fears?
A comical genius Montie has always been!
just like Bob Hope's twin,
He yelled, "And all I wanted to do,
was buy a house!"
"Without a cat within!"
Poor little creature disappeared
taken over by 5 dogs his home endeared.
If only they had let us known,
we love cats and we'd find a nice home for it
we bemoan............
I've set out food, and water each day
no sign of grey cat that suddenly appeared.
However, this first chapter is mild,
compared to the rest which is wild!
Please stay tuned for the rest,
The next chapters are the best!
Created by
Lovingcritters
Consue
Our new home
August 18, 2005
"People that leave their
beloved pets behind, for
someone else to tend to,
should be fined for abuse!"
*Comical Tears!*
Copyright ©
Lovingcritters
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Re: COMEDY WITH TEARS
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by MorningDove on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 05:55:31 PM AEST
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Oh my word, you poor dears, human and animal. I can't believe someone left their beautiful baby behind. The house looks lovely and it is a good thing you can still laugh. I am so glad you are back. I missed you so much. Tell Montie congrats and hugs on the new abode. He did good!!!!!
Warm love,
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Re: COMEDY WITH TEARS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 07:58:10 PM AEST
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| wonderful write,,its a astonishing that someone would do that,,,loved this,, |
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Re: COMEDY WITH TEARS
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by NoSaint on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:38:16 PM AEST
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Cant believe someone would leave their kitty behind...poor baby to come out and find the place had gone to the dogs...
Hugs
Shari |
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Re: COMEDY WITH TEARS
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 08:42:42 PM AEST
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Sad, oh my poor kitty. Just shaking my head.
*****Suddenly from under the bed,
a huge grey monster, well fed!
Half way up the wall, and then
into the bathroom scurrying.
Dogs in pursuit, going faster
than hurrying!!!!
LOLOL.. great picture. I can see it so clearly. Not certain about cats, if they can find their family. I know one time my dad got so disgusted with our dog, and he took it and dropped it off about 50 miles down the road. It did not take long for our dog to find its way back home. In this case, the cat does not know where its owners went. Ok, did I read this poem correctly lol.
*****
"People that leave their
beloved pets behind, for
someone else to tend to,
should be fined for abuse!"
Yes jail them, throw the keys away. So sad. Thank you consue for sharing.
Raquel Leah :D
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Re: COMEDY WITH TEARS
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 12:24:34 AM AEST
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What an awful thing to do...but a lovely write....
Thanks for sharing this Connie....
Great to see you again...
Jenni |
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Re: COMEDY WITH TEARS
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by venkat on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 02:31:33 AM AEST
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| I can't believe that such a wonderful cat was left out...Its very touching write Connie :-)venkat |
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Re: COMEDY WITH TEARS
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 06:20:49 AM AEST
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Nice house, nice cat and awesome write.
luv, huggs, big smiles,
yobrat,
emy |
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Re: COMEDY WITH TEARS
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 08:27:30 AM AEST
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"People that leave their
beloved pets behind, for
someone else to tend to,
should be fined for abuse!"
Amen I say to that. Impressive great write.
Friends of mine left their beloved tom cat in my care while they had to temporarily stay absent and I shall never forget the great time I had with "Schnugg-Schnugg."
Wonderful write, wherein the love for pets shines through in every line.
Kudos ConSue
Warm Love
Elizabeth
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Re: COMEDY WITH TEARS
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 1st September 2005 @ 06:15:04 PM AEST
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| great write. taking people through the emotions is a skill indeed. well done for a great write as always. chris (topher) |
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Re: COMEDY WITH TEARS
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by jaeann on
Thursday, 22nd September 2005 @ 03:22:07 PM AEST
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| Oh connie sue.....he is beautiful.....poor creature.....I hope he finds his way back to you......my love to you and yours.....pear lady |
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Re: COMEDY WITH TEARS
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by Robert_Edgar_Burns on
Friday, 23rd September 2005 @ 02:59:32 AM AEST
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That same thing happened in my neighborhood last month when
a lady with two dogs and a cat was evicted from her house. She didn't even take the furniture. She just skipped town leaving the
animals trapped inside. But our neighbor heard what sounded like a child screaming from inside the house and called authorities.
Luckily, the pets all survived and are in new homes now. I'm
with you on these sentiments. Good luck in your new home!
Rob |
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