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Desolate Child
Contributed by
forsaken_soul33
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Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 04:16:33 PM in AEST
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Torn from my cradle,
One dark night,
I was not able,
To fight for my life.
Thrown into a car,
With my mother by my side,
I soon noticed,
There were tears in her eyes.
She kept saying sorry,
That this is the way it had to be.
Suddenly came a slap,
From the man who was daddy.
He bagan to curse,
And said it was her fault.
My mother cried more,
But this time with blood.
We came to a stop,
And then found out,
I was on the floor,
On a street I knew nothing about.
The last thing I saw,
Were red lights fading away.
My parents were gone,
And I was afraid.
The last thing I heard,
Was my mother calling out,
That she loved me,
But father made her shut her mouth.
I'm 17 years old now,
I'm unhappy and barley alive.
I still have dreams,
From that profane night.
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Re: Desolate Child
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by smallfry on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 04:25:52 PM AEST
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| I think this was a very well written poem. It really brings a picture to your mind. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Desolate Child
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by The_Callif on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 04:27:32 PM AEST
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| great poem, did that actually happen to friend? if so then im sorry, and thats very sad. |
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Re: Desolate Child
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by Fionndruinne on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:01:54 PM AEST
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Definitely a terrible thing to have to go through.
You tell the story well, with a knack for painting impressions.
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Re: Desolate Child
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by Jenni_K on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 11:46:53 AM AEST
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OMG!! What a nightmare this must be!! Well written.
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Re: Desolate Child
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by mom11159 on
Tuesday, 30th August 2005 @ 12:14:31 PM AEST
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OMG How devasting for her and to survive to this day how strong may God be with your friend. You have written this with excellence your words touching my heart. Your imagery suberb. Excellent job
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