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Dearly Departed
Contributed by
Webalady555
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Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 10:20:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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We were best friends. You were the only one I could run to.
Then, you were taken from me from out of the blue.
Death laid its hand upon you and left it's mark.
All I could do is hope that a light would shine through the dark.
I stood beside you every minute of your pain.
Where was the life I hoped you would regain?
Your skin became pale and your eyes light.
I gripped your hand all through the night.
My bones became heavy and my legs weak.
All of my other problems suddenly became small and meak.
I wished I could be the one on that bed.
I knew there would be much less pain if I were dead.
You started slipping further and further away.
What awful debt was death making you pay?
I started to cry as I struggled to hear your breath.
Much to my fears there was nothing left.
The pain was greater than any i'll ever know.
But, all I could do is watch you go.
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2003-01-15 10:20:00]
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Re: Dearly Departed
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 10:23:09 AM AEST
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AAAWW THIS WAS SO TEARFULLY SAD,BUT
A VERY GOOD PEICE! SAYING GOOD BYE NEVER IS EASY! CHRISTINA |
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Re: Dearly Departed
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by gina on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 11:58:27 AM AEST
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ewww that was extremly touching ......tears in my eyes ......beautifully written.......losing a dear person is the hardest thing ever
i liked when u said :
"My bones became heavy and my legs weak.
All of my other problems suddenly became small and meak. "
GINA
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Re: Dearly Departed
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by OreO on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 12:07:48 PM AEST
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Awww this is so sad...this brought tears to my eyes ....this is beautifully written....such beauty in the wording you have for the dearly departed...thank you for sharing this one....welcome to YPDC...i look forward to reading more of your poetry.....
.:*~*:.OreO.:*~*:. |
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Re: Dearly Departed
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by wordsy on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:29:06 PM AEST
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Words well woven.
wordsy. |
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Re: Dearly Departed
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by Evanescencefreak on
Monday, 17th October 2011 @ 01:00:04 PM AEST
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| First poem yet to make me cry, its wonderful, and so true |
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