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The Reason
Contributed by
Caged Soul
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Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 05:29:15 AM in AEST
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Why you keep acting like a failed miscarriage, living life
to your preconceived percentage, not taking
full advantage of opportunities as they come.
It’s like
the atom bomb of intellectual feminage
has been let go over your Hiroshima, initiating
the inception of the wave of the demoralising
stutter that swings life’s rudder
swaying to the other
direction,
making you consider whether
you have it all together, or whether
your life aint nothing but a
perpetual plethora of post-mortif payoffs.
Like a vulture you are
feeding off the frail hope
of others, you are
beating down your brother in the name of
self exaltation, you are
reemphasising the sad cycle you reinact in order to keep your life intact,
you are giving in to the lie,
not knowing a part of you die as you relive the lie that has
gained the favour of your mind.
Your mind,
The glorified slave of the darkened sky,
the reason you choose to fly away,
the reason you refuse to stay and
endure the pain you gain with each passing day.
Copyright ©
Caged Soul
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2005-08-29 05:29:15]
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Re: The Reason
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by hauntedscorp on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 11:23:03 AM AEST
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Wow. You are a breath of fresh air! Welcome to YPDC: )
You did a great job expressing yourself in this intelligent, thought-provoking piece. Keep it up!
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Re: The Reason
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by secretwind on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 12:11:51 PM AEST
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what a crazy flow
I like it
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Re: The Reason
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by anitajames on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 03:21:16 PM AEST
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| Wow! Brutal, Biting, and Beautiful all at the same time. Great write. |
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Re: The Reason
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th November 2005 @ 06:47:16 AM AEST
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Hmmmm, I see three comments, Ash. Maybe I misread your post in the forums????
Anyway, I'd say it's pretty damn good. Definitely feel the anger.
Great write!
Thanks,
Tim
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