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A Lonely Patchwork Box
Contributed by
hunterj2k
on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 07:25:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The world had forced the box be closed
Yet treasures vast inside
The gold and jewels stay never seen
Kept locked away to hide
This buried treasure stagnates, lost
Forever it remains
A heart inside a heartless shell
All pleasure touched with pain
But someday love will come with keys
To unlock inner dreams
To open boxes long forgotten
Rip sadness by its seams
The treasures then be dusted off
And shined, with value full
But until love will reach this box
The gold stays darkened, dull.
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hunterj2k
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2005-08-28 19:25:40]
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Re: A Lonely Patchwork Box
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by brew on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 08:34:21 PM AEST
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I loved this write, and can relate totally. But, just know......it can be re-open.and when it does, it will be a most wonderful feeling, and be the best ever felt.!
Thanks for sharing
Brew~ |
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Re: A Lonely Patchwork Box
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by Jenni_K on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 08:37:49 PM AEST
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We all have boxes with hidden treasures that need opening.... I loved this.....
Some day love will reach this box..
Jenni |
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Re: A Lonely Patchwork Box
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by Oceandreamer on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 08:38:36 PM AEST
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| Great write!!Like your style of writing.I really like!. |
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Re: A Lonely Patchwork Box
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 08:55:51 PM AEST
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What an intersting way to see what's locked inside. I usually look at things the opposite way...where the dark secrets are locked behind the beautiful shells.
Interesting wrtie. Thought provoking.
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