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Roller Coaster
Contributed by
justme03
on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 05:01:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Up - a gradual climb as wind blows in my hair.
Momentum gathers.
I
fly
high. . .
into the sky.
Bright, sunny, clear. . .
I hit the top.
Climax of confusion.
I’m fully in a state of bliss, but
on the brink of sorrow.
Down- a steep rush.
I fall
d
o
w
n
into a dark abyss.
Shadows lurk, demons gather around me.
They tear at my insides,
ripping out my heart
til I’m emotionless.
A statue.
Back in a state of calm as I reach level. . .but then I
start to go back up the loop
of the roller coaster
of life.
Up is Happiness, Joy, Peace, Love and Life. . .
Down is Sorrow, Despair, Depression, Hate and Death. . .
When will I get off this roller coaster?
Copyright ©
justme03
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2005-08-28 17:01:57]
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Re: Roller Coaster
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by Archie on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 07:16:08 PM AEST
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| Great write. I have no words to help you only the words of a friend if you ever need to talk. It is hard to keep even keeled in a world that pulls you downward. |
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Re: Roller Coaster
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by secretwind on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 01:42:28 AM AEST
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"climax of confusion"
what a beautiful line
I feel you on this flow,well done. |
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Re: Roller Coaster
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by colinbaker62 on
Monday, 29th August 2005 @ 06:07:18 PM AEST
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I can personally relate to elements of these emotions too. I commend anyone who first of all orders their most inner thoughts, and secondly puts them into word form to share with others, for example on a public forum like this one.
Moving yes, but to my mind more a matter of courage I think to express such feelings in the first place.
Colin |
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Re: Roller Coaster
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 31st August 2005 @ 06:03:35 PM AEST
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| i no exactly how that feels...im also Bi and ive been rejected many times and i still am for it but i just learn to deal with it...if people cant except that then they arent worth it...great poem keep it up!! |
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Re: Roller Coaster
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by poisonpen00ad on
Friday, 2nd September 2005 @ 06:39:02 PM AEST
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| Great write and very moving. I enjoyed this one very much. |
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Re: Roller Coaster
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 05:14:31 AM AEST
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| loved this I liked the format as well,my hats off to you ,,you get a very well done |
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