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The Sky Will Cry
Contributed by
CrazyCowboy557
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Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 12:28:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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As the rain comes down
I hear the long lonesome sound
Of thunder cracking in the distance
And wind blowing on the fences
I watch the wind blow by
A bag flying in the sky
I see the lightning fall down
Followed by a familiar sound
Of thunder cracking in the distance
And the cat is growing tense
In a minute it will be done
As we start to see the sun
The clouds start to stray
And the sun comes out to stay
One turn, another twist
The sky mops up the mist
The sun mops up the sky
As the thunderstorm starts to die
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CrazyCowboy557
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2005-08-28 12:28:03]
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Re: The Sky Will Cry
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by hunterj2k on
Sunday, 28th August 2005 @ 07:18:03 PM AEST
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| I like how you personify the storm as a living entity. Wonderful imagery! |
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Re: The Sky Will Cry
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by CrazyCowboy557 on
Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 09:45:29 AM AEST
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Re: The Sky Will Cry
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by Spike on
Monday, 4th September 2006 @ 01:50:41 AM AEST
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A super description of the short sharp storm. I declare, that pesky bag shows up in all countries!
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